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Brooklyn Crane's avatar

"A broken rhythm is a rhythm still, / A witness to the hours none can kill." I will take this to heart day by day from now on. I'm so glad I stopped to read for of your work! It inspires me to keep writing poetry as well.

The Space Between by Gurvir's avatar

Thank you for the kindest comment I’ve probably ever received! I share my work so it resonates and inspires, I am glad you stumbled upon my tiny little page as well. Looking forward to reading your work in the future!

Think Mr A's avatar

Awesome love your stuff!

The Space Between by Gurvir's avatar

Thank you for the kind words! 😊

bluemoontexan's avatar

I love to crawl into this poem and meditate on the nature of time.

The Space Between by Gurvir's avatar

What a thoughtful comment! Exactly the feeling I was exploring as I wrote this, hope you enjoyed. Thank you! 😊

Hina Gondal's avatar

This is so beautiful🫶🏻❤️

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The Space Between by Gurvir's avatar

Wow, thank you for this comment! I am happy to have you stumble upon this post and share your thoughts. It’s a honour to have inspired such a feeling within a reader and that’s exactly why I write. I’ll be reading through some of your work and I have doubt you’re incredibly talented yourself! My messages are open and I happily welcome any correspondence, thank you once again

Connor Conor's's avatar

Looking forward, Gurvir!